dissertation proposal draft alpha submitted

well this is probably a beta, i gave tim a 3 page preproposal a while back and now i just gave him a 10 page draft minus the annotated bibliography. once i get this back with comments, i'll redraft it, attach the annotated bib and go another round then, give it to the full committee. the guidelines for the proposal are here. no more than 15 pages, mine should be around that with the bibliography